Week 4 Reflection: Project Revision

 For my project revision, I had received a lot of great advice on how to improve my story from my instructor and classmate. I added more pictures to create a better personal story, as well as rearranged the existing ones. I felt that it was lacking that visual structure. I also shortened the video altogether, because I was advised to do so in order to not bore my audience. In order to shorten my project, I revised the script completely by leaving out unnecessary details. I was also told that the audio on my original story was no good because there was clicking in the background, and I had no background music. So after I rewrote the script, I completely rerecorded my narration, and picked suitable music to put behind my voice. My classmate had suggested I include information about what I'd like to do with my MCBS degree, so I made a point to add that in there as well. I am very proud of the way that my project turned out, and I believe this version is much better than my rough draft. I hope you all enjoy, and thank you for taking the time to hear my story.